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there is a punchcard sin
like a queen of spades smoldering in an alley.

Engine,
you hear how the gears churn,
singing faster than we did before
back when black magic dropped like a
pair of socks from the sky with supplies
taped to a note that said
(oh, look at you now)
'U.S.A.,
freedom.'

such a beautiful brain:
what
what girl
runs on gasoline?

have a gallon
or we can call it a balloon,
and a new pair of glasses
for your tapered eyes
(you peel the bark back on the logs,
darling,
but you're not sure what you see),
and life says,
either nail jello to a tree,
successfully,

or keep your
icicles hanging from the eaves,
caterpillars frolicking in the ashes,
your 'Sam, I still don't have your number,'
and your totaled passion:
someone to hang inside out with,
string you up like a steak with.

oh
what the hunger
it
it
is trying to tell me
my brain churns like butter,
my insides aflare, my chakras combusting,
my
:icongoose-fat:
the future

edit: A DD! Thank you to ^NicSwaner for featuring this, to *JakesExceptionfor suggesting it, and to everyone who added this to their favorites or left a comment! I'm almost walking on air :love:
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Given 2013-01-24
You can't say those opening lines are not catchy as Hell the suggester challenges. There's no denying that the rhythm and word-play- in this poem is on a level of its own. crystallophone is by ~goose-fat ( Suggested by *JakesException and Featured by ^NicSwaner )
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(Think you still owe me for this.)
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~goose-fat Apr 20, 2013   Writer
Maybe.
Any ideas?
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~Dozza88pwns Feb 25, 2013  Student Writer
Everytime I read this, the more times I want to come back and read it.

I hate on dA as soon as something is reminiscent of something not freshly posted, people ignore it!

<3 <3 so much love for this poem.

It rightly belongs in my one of a kind folder.
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~goose-fat Feb 27, 2013   Writer
Thanks, and let me just say that I'm flattered to be in that folder xD
It's not totally invisible yet, thankfully. People still stop by every once in a while.
How could we get around that failing of dA? :>
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~Dozza88pwns Feb 28, 2013  Student Writer
Well my best idea involves bacon rashers and no actual results. I'll come back to you on any ideas I have on how to bring a mass structural change to dA ;)

This poem is not just in the folder.... *queue sappy music* ITS IN MY HEART <3

ohkay, apologies for that.
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:icongoose-fat:
~goose-fat Mar 1, 2013   Writer
looool no apology required :)
...actually, I think your folder is doing the trick, because a couple of people have faved it since then.
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~Dozza88pwns Mar 1, 2013  Student Writer
Really? Well I'll be damned.
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~Karinta Feb 25, 2013  Student General Artist
I don't know what it's about, but I like it.
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~goose-fat Feb 27, 2013   Writer
That's still good! :heart:
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